Sunday, March 10, 2013

[a conversation with the ignorant black.]

As explored previously within Borders, Bridges, and Boundaries, poetry can act as a contact zone as well as a bridge between cultures. Through reading The Wind Shifts, we as an audience gained the ability to learn a little about the Hispanic and Latino cultures through the portrayal given by the various artists. The poems included comprised of various opinions of cultures, from embracing the Latino heritage, to rejecting assimilation, as well as a general confusion on being on the "in between." By reading this particular anthology, the intended population gains an insight on the struggles within the Spanish-speaking community, allowing the people to form a connection and thus eroding the xenophobic barrier that has evolved and continuously reinforced with every terrorist attack. A similar education has been created and reinforced with A Capella,  a collection of Mennonite poems.

I must admit, I did not know what to expect when I first picked up this particular anthology. Previous to attending Goshen College, I had never even heard of--never mind encountered--a Mennonite before. Upon doing a little bit of basic research, I discovered that they seemed to be conservative individuals who held peace as a strong value, as well as volunteer work, in order to become as Christ-like as possible. It seemed simple enough, and so with attending the college, my presumptions seemed to be accurate. When I attended my peace-making seminar class, that is when I learned that there wasn't just one group of Mennonites-- in fact, there are a number of subcultures, varying the spectrum from erratically liberal to excessively conservative. In addition, the traditions changed by state as well as by the original country one's family emigrated from. These changes are reflected in A Capella as well, ranging from Julia Kasdorf's "Mennonites" to David Wright's "A New Mennonite Replies to Julia Kasdorf." There are even strange and "forbidden" concepts to write about, like Di Brandt's "nonresistance, or love Mennonite style." No matter what the case, I was shown time and time again that even though the Mennonite culture is a culture far different from my own, there was something for me to learn, understand, and eventually love. The poetry acts as a bridge and allows me to make connections between something that is completely foreign to me, and something I know very well: my identity and values.

So in writing my own poem based off a form discussed in A Capella, I found it easiest to take the Jeff Gundy route. My first drafts began with mere imitations of "How to Write the New Mennonite Poem," and I thought it best to focus on the length of the poem, as it focuses on a number of references made by Julia Kasdorf in her "Mennonites." However, upon the third or fourth draft, I discovered this was not the case. It was simply too difficult to explain everything about an African American, especially when there is not one clear view of the race. Instead, when I decided to focus on one particular subset (in this case, the rude and ignorant African Americans who are subject to today's stereotypes and actively fulfill them), I found it much easier to write, and thus it brings me to this draft. I am sure as of this moment it is still incomplete, but considering that my audience (in this case, my peers) seemed to be able to relate in some context, I feel that I may have reached my goal. Within my poem, I am writing as both an outsider and an insider. I am providing inclusive criticism to my own ethnicity and the contradictions that exist within it. The plight of the modern African American is having to choose between remaining ignorant to stay accepted by the culture, or to embrace education and diversity and thus be considered the ultimate evil, White

And my poem is as follows:
Oftentimes, we remember to write about Martin Luther King, Jr.
How he saved us from tyranny and oppression,
singlehandedly delivering us from segregation with talks of “I have a dream!”
If we’re lucky, we might remember Rosa Parks and
sitting on the bus makes us no slave of the white man.
 
The white man made us who we are,
stealing us from Africa and placing us here in America.
Let’s pretend that the temptation for guns and new technology
didn’t make us sell each other out.
It’s not like we’re reliving our past mistakes right now.
 
In fact, let’s blame everything on Caucasian authority.
They’re the whole reason why we can’t get a job.
The only things we can do in life are play golf, slam dunk, and shoot bullets.
Females can pop babies and get welfare, too.
Don’t forget the child support.
 
Celebrities are made when you go on Maury or Jerry Springer,
not so much when you graduate from high school or stay abstinent.
As long as you praise Jesus, you can get away with almost anything.
Except, of course, being white.
God forbid you act white.
 
And that can happen if you commit the following sins:
You use that “white people speak.”
You dress conservatively instead of “showing those curves.”
You prefer to straighten your hair rather than keeping it natural.
But most importantly, you don’t “get your nails done and your hair did.”
 
If you appreciate anything as a Black,
know that you will not take anything from the White man!
You will not take his stereotypes, his ignorance, or his name-calling.
Nor will you take his jobs, his education, his family, or his stability.
You will stay in the negative, where you belong.

6 comments:

  1. I absolutely love your poem. You do a great job of depicting this struggle in a way that is relatable for all parties involved (or even not involved, but simply an outside viewer). You can see every member on the spectrum, from the stereotypical "ghetto" black to those who are "trying to be white". The tone you use in the poem suits it perfectly and adds so much to the voice. The sense of sarcasm, tinged with a hint of bitterness, helps show the ridiculous nature of this dilemma.

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  2. Marlie: I really like how you acknowledged the border between blacks and whites in a seemingly different way than we have identified in class. In your poem, you talk about how blacks avoid being white at all cost, even at the expense of becoming more knowledgeable. Even though blacks are, technically speaking, free to be equal, they are stuck in a stereotype, doing what they can to be different from the whites, their oppressors. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic as well as adding a new perspective. It is interesting, and upsetting, to see how the past continually haunts the present.

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  3. I found your poem to be very enjoyable. I appreciate the sarcastic and almost humorous tone, even though the topic that you're discussing can be very difficult and serious. It seems to be a good way to address the issues in the black community. As an outsider to this group, I really don't know what it's like to feel the pressures and problems that you discuss, but your poem helped give me an idea of what it may be like. Many of the things you say I couldn't say for fear of coming across as racist or just making stereotypes. So it really is neat to hear your honesty and insight.

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  4. You know I loved your poem! When you read this poem in class I had to laugh because you told the truth with putting sarcasm and a sense of humor behind it which made it very enjoyable for the reader or listener. In my poem when writing it I changed many lines because I was worried I would offend the reader, but you did a great job of being honest without being offensive.

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  5. You used this assignment skillfully to explore in-group critique and really caught the attention of the class. The poem is provocative and uses many specific images and phrases that get the point across. As for title, I'm thinking that a new title might enhance the poem. Maybe something like "God Forbid You Should Be White" or "White Man Blues"--I think it's the "ignorant" phrase I'm struggling with here, because that word is used in so many contexts as a judgment. Who is calling who ignorant?

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    1. Ann, I initially did consider giving a different title to the poem, but I chose this one because the phrase "ignorant" is a term used by the African American community in reference to itself. The more...uncouth, if I may say, are recognized as such, not only by those who consider themselves upper class, but also by the more...uncivilized themselves. By choosing the word "ignorant," I am making a choice to reveal myself as African American without saying it directly. However, I do like "God Forbid You Should Be White." If I were to make this into something else and begin a collection of poems about this particular plight within my culture, I would perhaps coin that title.

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